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DawnG
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0 posted 2001-01-21 01:17 PM


How do I love you?
One minute at a time,
With every sweet embrace.

Digging deeper into a soul,
Only our love can produce.

Intensity in your eyes,

Leading me to heaven,
On the wings of an angel's,
Very soft embrace embellishing our,
Everlasting Love.

Yellowed pages of photographs,
Organized by a life,
Unified by loving bliss.


© Copyright 2001 Dawn - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2001-01-21 01:49 PM


Lovely acrostic here, on a difficult topic because it has been written so many times.  You have done well.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2001-01-21 02:19 PM


Beautiful acrostic....so full of a gentle love and devotion.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Denise
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3 posted 2001-01-21 04:05 PM


This is lovely, Callie! Very nice!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2001-01-21 08:34 PM


Dawn,
  A beautiful acrostic of love, well done!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Gene
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5 posted 2001-01-22 12:27 PM


Callie,
These acrostis aren't easy. You wrote a wonderful one.

Gene

pegasus111
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6 posted 2001-01-22 03:28 PM


very lovely acrostic, Callie..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Munda
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7 posted 2001-01-22 05:42 PM


Beautiful acrotic Dawn! And you make it look so easy... sigh, I better go back to class...
kaile
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8 posted 2001-01-24 05:25 AM


Callie,

lovely acrostic and i must say i like the concept of the last verse..i am still one of those who believe true love lasts forever...

Yu Lan
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9 posted 2001-01-26 03:12 AM


this is nice Callie, very beautiful.. and they are so hard to do well.. ^_^
Lynne

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10 posted 2001-01-26 08:29 AM


Callie,
Good one. After 30+ years, I am still finding ways to say, How Do I Love You?, to my wife.
Thanks for a new review,
Melton

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11 posted 2001-01-26 01:02 PM


Callie...

*sighs* this is wonderful...I think you left me and my recent attempts at acrostics in the dust....lovely,lovely job.

Ranea

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12 posted 2001-01-26 08:12 PM


think i did one of these when I was at school. I was never any good a them. But you are, And  I like this one

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.



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