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Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2001-01-19 01:55 PM

Echoes Caught

She calls me to supper
in her native tongue, French.
I reply in my Mother’s
answering; “Ya wohl, leibchen!”

Eating an elegant Italian
in our new semi-Victorian.
Glass plates from France
lighting soft in antique brass.

Tracy and Lynard playing low
cribbage board is keeping score.
Fresh snow floating, loosing battle
not sticking, just wetting our street.

Her Mama on the party line
I tease, kidding my interpreter.
My sweet, sometimes wicked lover
this women I love ferociously.

Taking snapshots of life
painted in rhythm and rhyme.
Isn’t this the poets responsibility
asking as her voice echoes in my mind...

bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-01-19 06:22 PM

Hey bleeding, I loved this, I felt as though I was there, I could hear it and see it

Great writing

Maree

I can't help but feel my heart fall between the pregnant
pause of all you won't say and all I can not ask

~Jewel~

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2001-01-20 06:01 AM

and so it is..mighty fine one too..lovely.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2001-01-20 07:04 AM

Beautiful poetic kodak moments!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

4 posted 2001-01-20 10:56 AM

Just goes to show, you don't need a camrea to take pictures. And a camera couldn't have took a a lovelier picture than this

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-01-20 03:45 PM

Wow, nice one here. The ending left an impacting feeling within me. Nice.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2001-01-21 04:01 PM

Lovely snapshot, Daniel!

Denise

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