navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Deadly Sin
The Corner Pub
Post A Reply Post New Topic Deadly Sin Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2001-01-12 12:21 PM


It's wrong
To take it
Into your hands

It's wrong
To take it
Without plans

It's wrong
To say it
"I love you too"

It's wrong
To say it
When it's not true

It's wrong
To leave me
When I cry

It's wrong
To leave me
To sob while you sigh

It's wrong
To forget us
When she's comin'

It's wrong
To forget us
When I'm 6 mths. in

It's wrong
Not to say goodbye
When she knows

It's wrong
Not to say goodbye
While my emotions froze

It's wrong
To not be upset
Or miss your child

It's wrong
To not be upset
When the number is dialed

It's wrong
To take it
Into your hands

It's wrong
To take it
Without plans

Not great, but it satisfied my need to say something!


"Hope is no stronger than the tremulous beads of dew strung on the filament of spiderweb, and it alone can't long support the terrible weight of an an

© Copyright 2001 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-01-12 08:11 PM


Very sad, Alicia, very sad.

Denise

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
2 posted 2001-01-12 11:10 PM


Yeah, it's sad, but needed to be said. Now how 'bout writing one entitled, "It's Right"

~Gene

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2001-01-12 11:15 PM


*hugs tightly*  
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Deadly Sin

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary