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kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME

0 posted 2001-01-12 01:08 AM


To a Friend

Never truly loved?  How can it be?
Do you not yet know what love is?
It is not trumpets and bells,
Fireworks, Romeo and Juliet.
Perhaps it came and you missed it,
For it lay itself at your feet,
As Ruth at the feet of Boaz,
Only you did not see
But went off to the harvest
And never knew that
You could have had what
Changed the world, or
Your world, at least.



© Copyright 2001 Marilyn Gordon - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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1 posted 2001-01-12 06:27 AM


Dear Marilyn; Lovely poem and I could so understand this. Some are so wounded that they just can't believe or take in the love given. I once was that person and only after God healed me through much therapy and His great love, was I able to know my lovable self.  Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
2 posted 2001-01-12 08:55 AM


Marilyn,
I like the wisdom in your poem.  I think some people strive too hard for fairy tale romance, and can't always see that real love is not perfect! (sometimes life is too busy too!)
Nicely done!  

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
3 posted 2001-01-12 09:01 AM


Marilyn....

I feel the same way....to many people expect perfection...when real, true love...is loving someone when their not. Wonderful!

Ranea
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kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2001-01-13 12:19 PM


Ellie - Thank you.  I am glad you have been healed and feel how lovable you really are. As it happens, I'm not sure this person was wounded in that way.  He had been married for many years and had grown children from that marriage, but claimed never to have been truly in love with anyone.  Romantic that I am, I couldn't understand that.  

Debbie - Thanks.  That is what I was thinking when I wrote this, thus the suggestion in this poem that he really had found love, but didn't recognize it because it wasn't what he expected.  

Ranea - (What a pretty name!)  Thanks.  I know you have written with great wisdom on this subject yourself.  Yes, real love is loving always, not matter what, because you must.     How's that for a romantic point of view?  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

kaile
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5 posted 2001-01-16 08:51 AM


kcs, this reminded me of something i have come across

the only way to love is not to seek your perfect someone but to love your imperfect someone perfectly.


Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
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Santa Clara, CA USA
6 posted 2001-01-16 10:50 AM


Oooh...I do agree with this kcs!  It took me three proposals just to notice the love that was neverending!!! Luckily, we're finally getting married in May so the not noticing will cease!  Thanks for this--was an excellent read!

~~Jamie      


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
7 posted 2001-01-16 04:42 PM


three times is the charm, Jamie..lol

a very insightful piece, Kcs..lovely read..your range never ceases to amaze me..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME
8 posted 2001-01-16 11:42 PM


Kaile - What a beautiful thought!  Thank you for sharing it.

Jamie - Glad you finally got it right!   Hope you keep noticing forever.

Pegasus - Thanks.     You seem to have quite a range yourself.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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