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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-01-10 02:49 AM

Can Magic live thus
in deepest cold of winter?
only in the heart.

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

1 posted 2001-01-10 07:40 AM

magic floats
glittering ice shards pierce
dark winter’s gloom

(ellie a wonderful theme to spin off of, if you don't mind)

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"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

[This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 01-10-2001).]

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2001-01-10 11:38 AM

Crystals pure of Ice
Natures perfect looking glass
Magic's held within

Magic takes no holiday, but co-exist with ALL seasons!
Dennis :^)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-10 01:08 PM

Very Beautiful.....i liked this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-01-10 07:34 PM

What a beautiful thought Ellie ... just lovely ... warmed my heart, thank you!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-01-11 01:27 PM

ELLIE...you are
magic indeed!

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

6 posted 2001-01-11 08:25 PM

I love Haiku, especially when they're this good. But did you know it reads just as well as a Senryu?

Gene

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2001-01-16 08:45 AM

i appreciated your thoughts..sometimes we have to take charge for ourselves, yup

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-01-16 04:25 PM

Well yes it can! I love your message! However, Ellie, this is more of a senryu than a haiku

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

9 posted 2001-01-16 04:49 PM

a rose by any other name..........delicious...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

10 posted 2001-01-16 11:53 PM

Ah, Ellie! Magic will always live in a heart as warm as yours.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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