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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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Now is the peaceful dreaming time within this hidden place sublime. This secret garden, lovers’ quest, a still place for their hearts to rest. ‘Neath barren willow lovers weep, hearts that ache seek a sweet relief. Words wing out in the waning night a mourning dove’s slow lonely flight. Two star-crossed lovers need to know the promise of the radiant bow. As they calmly stand hand-in-hand, lost then found, in this timeless land. "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wordancer; Time does seem to cease to exist when love is at it's first blooming...This is exquiste poetry! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Sweet new romance...ah...so familiar! This is so well delivered! *clap-clap* Great Wordancer! Remind me of the better days! ~~Jamie   I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
lovly simply lovly I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
timeless land..indeed... what a wonder love is..  very sweet..very romantic images.. hugs, g "sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....." -kathleen vibbert |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
well this one just leaves me all warm and dreamy inside Sigh Suzanne |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
As they calmly stand hand-in-hand, lost then found, in this timeless land. I enjoyed this whole poem, Wordancer, but these two lines really speak to me. It's that feeling that you have been re-discovered that really makes you feel loved, isn't it? Nice job. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
beautiful..knew it would be..lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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