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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-01-05 10:20 PM


found this in the 'attic'..thought of kaile, who tells us of his 'school days'      

ink spot...
its that same old ink spot
it follows me!
from paper to paper
from school to school  
from state to state!
that stupid spot...
its black
     and ugly!
sometimes red
like the blood i shed...
shaped in such terrible
               shapes
ink spot, ink spot
go away!
i must get a better spot
today...
but its always
that same ugly ink spot...

-dgvarner
  11-89


"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



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kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2001-01-05 10:47 PM


Cute, Gale!  I can almost hear it to the tune of "Feelings".  Gotta get an attic like yours.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

brian madden
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ireland
2 posted 2001-01-06 09:07 AM


I wonder what other treasures you have stored away in your attic.

There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong
inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode

Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2001-01-06 09:24 AM


Gale,
  Darn Spots, Be Gone! How they haunt me so!
I like this one! What else shall you grace us with from your attic?  
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


dgvarner
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4 posted 2001-01-06 07:25 PM


thanks MAR!  "feelings" aye...LOL  

BRIAN..i'll tell ya..its about time i put an idex on that attic of mine..

DEN..well..lets see..i'm sure i could scrounge up some more sillies like this one..ha!  

thank you guys, for reading!  hugs, g


"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



kaile
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5 posted 2001-01-06 08:24 PM


thanx, dg...was pleasantly surprised when i came here and saw a post dedicated to me...

this is such an inspiration...how nice it must be to be writing for a decade and to be able to look back on your past writings and understand the past you...and its comforting to know that since you have done so, perhaps a decade later i will too be posting poems from my attic....

personally, this brought back so many memories of when i was nine(in 1989)...i have no idea why but perhaps seeing 11/89 triggered off a memory trip...

HUGS!

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2001-01-06 10:57 PM


KAILE..glad you enjoyed!    

hmm..you were 9..when i was in college...  

glad i could bring back good memories for you of 1989!  and i'm sure you'll still be writing in 10 yrs..you'll have an attic full of good stuff  

hugs, g

Swamp¤Faeryie
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7 posted 2001-01-07 12:25 PM


out damn spot

"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

dgvarner
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8 posted 2001-01-07 12:32 PM


SWAMPY....ROFL!        
pegasus111
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ocala, fl, usa
9 posted 2001-01-07 03:58 AM


yes..most of us have our "spots" that follow us around wherever we go..this little ditty has a far deeper meaning for me.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Parker
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ON
10 posted 2001-01-08 02:07 AM


writing little pictures on your skin with a pen can cause the poison ink to seep into your blood stream.... thats probably how you lost your mind.... back then...  
dgvarner
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11 posted 2001-01-08 10:11 AM


PEG..a deeper meaning...hmm..youre a thinker arent you!     thanks for reading!  

PARKER..yes..yes..that must have been it..  
huh??  my what?  what mind?  i do distinctly remember those things written on my hand..and arm..and the other side of my hand..after my notebook was full..and my notes..and my homework....my what?  what mind?.....  

"there is no 'best' in a world of individuals"
-unknown


JOY 14
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12 posted 2001-01-09 10:34 PM


Ink Spot! Oh to that ink spot! I like.

Joy

Yu Lan
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13 posted 2001-01-10 07:17 PM


^_^ I like those ink spots! ^^ no right or wrong answer.. hehe, but u can banish them if u like.. this is cute, dg.. ^^ Mm, I think the earliest poem I have is from when I was 11.. I haven't found any earlier ons that have dates on them..

Love this!
Love,
Lynne

dgvarner
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14 posted 2001-01-10 11:07 PM


JOY and LYNN..thank you both for stopping in on this little silly    it was actually written about the grades on my papers in school LOL!  

hugs, g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

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