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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2001-01-04 05:36 PM


Do you hear me
Do you see me
Am i someone that you know

Do you need me
Do you understand me
Am i someone you dream of

Do you want me
Do you breath me
Am i someone you lust for

Do you feel me
Do you know it's me
Am i someone you can love



© Copyright 2001 Suzanne Arlene - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-01-04 07:45 PM


Very nice, Suzanne! Questions I'm sure all of us have asked!

Denise

raleighbttrfly
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Posts 160
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2 posted 2001-01-04 09:14 PM


grate read i have asked these qustions many times
i hope to see more from you
nicely done

I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

DawnG
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3 posted 2001-01-04 11:13 PM


Suzanne,

Great poem. Questions I am once again thinking about tonight.

                           Dawn

Quiet One
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since 2001-01-01
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4 posted 2001-01-05 12:14 PM


Good questions
and are we comfortable with the validity of the answers...

shira
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5 posted 2001-01-05 07:23 PM


Very very nice - thoughts of acceptance and love that we all ask of ourselves and others. Nicely done.
Suzanne Arlene
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6 posted 2001-01-06 10:41 AM


Thank you all for your kind responses. I guess i ask too many questions huh lol
I wish you all peace and love  Suzanne

pegasus111
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7 posted 2001-01-07 04:28 AM


Suzanne...ask, and you shall receive.. very nice read.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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