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a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2001-01-03 10:58 PM




You blaze within me,
not a flame, but fire,
that no one but us can see.

I feel your strength, your power,
your heart and mine.
I have found my peace, for you I pine.

I have found my other piece,
to complete who is me,
no one else will fit.

The sun praises your face,
and graces your name,
for you, I am unworthy of feeling the flame.

I rejoice in saying it,
and you know its true,
but I really, truely, forever, love you.

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~~My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, writhes in hatred, and dies in violence.~~
Myself




[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 01-03-2001).]

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2001-01-04 03:50 AM


ahhh..ain't love grand..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-01-04 08:01 AM


Sigh.. "How do I love thee..." lovely romantic poem. Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
3 posted 2001-01-04 02:45 PM


pegasus-love can be grand, but it can also hurt A LOT.
Eliie-this was written for my boyfriend aka Little Spyro


~~My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, writhes in hatred, and dies in violence.~~
Myself



kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2001-01-05 12:45 PM


Very pretty writing.  I love the play on peace and piece.     He should enjoy this.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2001-01-06 11:23 PM


"The sun praises your face,
and graces your name"

i believe it does...
he is certainly a loved dragon around here!    

very sweet write for your love..  

hugs, g


"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
6 posted 2001-01-07 06:58 PM


How lovely, what a sweet read.  I really enjoy this one little girl.



"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

shira
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since 2000-12-12
Posts 88
Hamburg, PA
7 posted 2001-01-08 05:17 AM


Very warm, loving and heartfelt.. I know what this feels like, and its very well presented here. Nice poem.
a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
8 posted 2001-01-08 06:20 PM


I don't really write romantic poetry. I just did this offhand, to change the mood a little. I have a tendency to do poems based on reality and life.
Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
East Coast
9 posted 2001-01-09 01:08 AM




Upon your face is written clear
Thy smile complete, in view.
Warmth that's held within thy heart
A treasure, strength of two.
Power, peace, of thou and thine
Together is a fit.
Grace befalls the both of you
As flame is surely lit...

Lady Ollyne...turning a few phrases for thee



"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
10 posted 2001-01-10 07:44 PM


beautiful, a love worth writing.. I am sure Spyro will love it, it's the perfect poem! ^_^

Love,
Lynne

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
11 posted 2001-01-10 09:07 PM


Your a_(very lucky)_little_girl, the Little Dragon is really a very fine young man.  

~Gene

Romy
Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
12 posted 2001-01-11 09:15 AM


You've written a beautiful description of your love, nice job!
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
13 posted 2001-01-11 12:36 PM


once again,
ahhh... so cute!
spyro is a great guy.  I hope you guys will continue to make each other as happy as you seem to make each other right now.
best wishes.
Alicia A. Renzelman

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