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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Angel on my shoulder but the devils in my hart This must be how my troubles start Best intentions that fall apart Good deeds Meant only to fill my needs Later on it will make hearts bleed Time falls away I relay wanted to stay Moving a constant price I pay Smiles turn to tears at night I’m losing this lonely fight Alone the wind dose bite I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is really pretty. It might even inspire me to write another poem. If it does that would be a miracle. Dawn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this person doesent seem to be able to get a grip on his/her identity..hope it isn't you..interesting read..gives me a helpless feeling..like I'm being manipulated by some outside force. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Callie we all hate wrighters block,thank you and good luck! Peg11 no this is not about me but my friend who is relay a good person jest as you said dealing with an out side force(he drinks too much) thanks for reading! I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
good deeds meant only to fill my needs later on, it will make hearts bleed this stanza gave me some food for thought--sometimes we do things that we think are beneficial to ourselves and affect only us but the peole around us may be hurt by such gestures....beautifully expressed  |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
I don't like the feeling that everything I do and say is wrong either... but you've expressed it very well in this piece. Grand food for thought!  ~~Jamie  I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
kaile and wikket thanks for reading i do think we all at one time or another do things with the best intetions but end up making a mess of it, or something..... glade you liked it! I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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