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blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2001-01-03 12:36 PM

Wrote these ones last night for all lovers, lost or otherwise... They fit together, so they are posted together.

Piece of Me

Here it is
A piece of my heart
Please take it with you
When you part

Just so you remember
How much I love thee
I give to you
This part of me

Pieces of You

A piece of you
Is present
In everything
I do

You let me see
What's to
Be found
In "we"

You are always here
When I
Shed a
Sorrowful tear

I wish that I
Could return
Everything you
Helped find

But I have lost
All but
Your smiles'
The cost

But still there is
Slender hope
Of regaining
Our bliss

True love never dies
Between you
And I
No lies

Still pieces of you
Are present
In everything
I do
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In every memory, sweet or sad, we find a small piece of tomorrow.
Alicia A. Renzelman

[This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 01-03-2001).]

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2001-01-03 12:41 PM

I liked this, Alicia..it has a nice flow to it..and so true..lost loves do leave pieces of themselves behind that just seem to hang around forever.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-01-03 06:39 PM

beautiful..there are always pieces resting in the memories no matter what..huggzz

~Wynter/Moonchild

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

raleighbttrfly
Member

since 2000-11-21

Posts 160
Raleigh NC

3 posted 2001-01-05 10:01 AM

this is a grate piece of work
it not only showed the sorrow of parting ways but also the feeling of the bond that is left betwen two people after they part
wonderfully done!

I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

4 posted 2001-01-07 06:51 PM

So lovely...we do give pieces of ourselves to the ones we love, what a thought for me ponder, thanks.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-01-07 07:35 PM

Alicia~
Lovely thoughts from you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

6 posted 2001-01-07 08:10 PM

Beautiful poem! The heart has many chambers to hold much love...past, present, and future. Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

7 posted 2001-01-10 12:12 PM

WOW! The last time I was here, no one had chosen to reply to these works. It's amazing what a week can do. You all give me so much inspiration. A love lost, a hope found, a truth told, a secret kept... You can never know what you mean to me! Thank you so much for the endless hours of great reads and inquisitive inquiries! Sorry...
Love & Honesty always!
Alicia A. Renzelman

In every memory, sweet or sad, we find a small piece of tomorrow.
Alicia A. Renzelman

bestgirl911
Senior Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

8 posted 2001-01-10 01:15 PM

Alicia...

I believe that the pieces of our past make up who we are...Every person that touches our lives leaves their impression upon us..you expressed that so well here. wonderfully done.

Best

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

9 posted 2001-01-12 09:28 AM

Alicia,
I agree with Bestgirl, I think who we are and how we live our lives is in part due to the impact that others have had on us. In turn, the "Pieces" of ourselves that we leave behind will have an effect on others!
Great Poem and so true!

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2001-01-17 06:20 AM

i appreciated the thoughts and ditto everyone else

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

11 posted 2001-01-17 05:41 PM

Beautiful piece. True love never dies... that's true. I hope it comes true for you.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

12 posted 2001-01-18 04:20 PM

Never thought of love that way, but I guess a piece of it is given and kept each time. I like it, ME

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