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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2001-01-02 12:02 PM


Fragmented thoughts
Emotions un-sought
Turbulence ahead
Voices fill my head

Need a hand to hold
My body feels so cold
No ones around
Sink slowly to the ground

Head bowed with grief
Welcome to reality
One tear falls lonely
Makes it's way to stormy seas

If wishes came true
Then I'd be with you
Instead of trying to say goodbye
Why did you choose to die?



With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

© Copyright 2001 Angel - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2001-01-02 01:01 AM


(((hugs))) Sometimes you just have to let the grief happen.  Hope it's better soon.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-01-02 03:52 AM


so many unanswered questions..so much grief to deal with when a loved one dies..isn't it interesting that we feel almost nothing for the unknown thousands that die every day? what unusual creatures we are.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
3 posted 2001-01-02 06:07 PM


Angel...I have no words.  True that time does heal in a way, but you'll never forget.  Please remember we're all here for you to listen!  Thank you for sharing this...it takes a lot of courage!  

~~Jamie


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

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At the edge and a doorway,TX
4 posted 2001-01-03 05:21 AM


This piece reminded me of a friend of mine named Arthur and some day I will be able ot let him go too.  

I dreamed your dreams
I thought your thoughts
I held you
I prayed for you
I was the one
I was the one who wanted to help you
I didn't know what you would do
I didn't know you were gone
Till the phone beside my bed rang in a horrid song
Someday we will meet again
Someday we will play
Some day I will understand
Why you went away

I hope that your pain soon fades to joy in realization that he is in a better place.

God Bless you and may your guides help you on your painful journey.

Love Always,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2001-01-03 07:49 AM


What terrible pain you are in, grief and loss of your beloved are wounds deep in the heart. I weep with you....Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



shira
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since 2000-12-12
Posts 88
Hamburg, PA
6 posted 2001-01-03 02:41 PM


How very simple a poem with such a sad message. *hugs* The pain in the poem is evident - missing someone is so hard.. Nice read.
Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

7 posted 2001-01-03 04:10 PM


* just hugs tight...*

love you hun...

Adam

Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
8 posted 2001-01-03 09:13 PM


oh hun
*huggles her*  my hand is always here for you my friend.  if you ever need me i am here.  *huggles her tight*
love you hun
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

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