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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-01-01 07:15 PM


Why does the world seem,
More clear when the tears fall,
And why feel so much better,
After  I've watched the rain drizzle,
Maybe its cos the rain seems to,
Wash all the pain away it seams,
Or maybe it's cos the rain,
Has a habit of dancing down my window pane.


Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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pegasus111
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1 posted 2001-01-01 09:19 PM


hmmm..I get just the opposite effect from rain..I get kinda pensive..funny hoe different people react differently to the same stimulus..nice short poem too.. HAPPY NEW YEAR.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-01-02 12:29 PM


It's hard not to smile at the image of rain dancing down window panes.     It is interesting how much the weather can affect our moods.  Nice write.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

kaile
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3 posted 2001-01-02 07:24 AM


i agree with you though i usually cant care less when i am out there braving strong winds and rain and the rain seems to be more like caning me...LOL

nice short piece

Quiet One
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Shhhhh
4 posted 2001-01-02 11:22 AM


Put on an old change of clothes and go out for a walk in the rain, splash in a few puddles,
smell, feel and witness the cleansing

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
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Santa Clara, CA USA
5 posted 2001-01-02 12:20 PM


Ooh I agree I agree!  I love the rain--but even more so because I can waste the day away inside my room and not have to worry about wasting it!  Messed up logic...or maybe I'm just a lazy arse!     

~~Jamie  


"...I mean, when I first met you, you were all like, 'Oh Phooey, I burned the darn muffins.'
Now, you walk into a bar, and sailors come runnin' out!"

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