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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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0 posted 2000-12-31 03:20 PM


Snow dots hold my eyes
The dainty lashes pull back
White pulses collide
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Bark layers peel slow
Uncovering secret souls
Twigs snapped off once born
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Macrame forest
Braided moss for chickadee
dee dee in the wood

Hope you enjoyed reading those haikus. How was everyone's Holiday Season? I know it's not quite over yet, but today is New Years Eve so I thought what the heck!  

Joy

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-12-31 03:36 PM


Joy; These are exquisite Haiku. There is depth and meanig here. I had to reread them a few times and each time I discovered something new. Wonderful! Happy New Yeaer! Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
2 posted 2000-12-31 03:40 PM


Ah well done Joy ! Well done !! Happy New Year to ya !  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-12-31 04:14 PM


They are lovely, Joy! So are you! Nice to finally see you!

Denise

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-12-31 04:53 PM


Beautiful!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2000-12-31 11:25 PM


I liked all of these, but especially the third.  The chickadee has always been a favorite of mine.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
6 posted 2001-01-01 05:52 AM


I liked these a lot Joy..very nice work.. )

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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7 posted 2001-01-01 10:24 AM


Thanks everyone!  

Joy

brian madden
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ireland
8 posted 2001-01-02 05:29 PM


njoyed the lovely haikus.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

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