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Artemis Junior Member
since 2000-12-31
Posts 15Toronto,Ontario,Canada |
IF I ONLY HAD ONE CHANCE WITH YOU I often find myself day dreaming of you, No matter how hard I try, I just can't seem to get you off my mind. I think about you and me and what it could be if my dreams became a reality. If I only had one chance with you. Your dark brown hair and beautiful eyes, sends shivers down my spine. The sight of you makes me weak, When I'm around you I'm nervous and cannot speak. If I only had one chance with you. There's just something about you that I haven't found in anyone else before, And as time passes by I find myself wanting you more. If I only had a chance with you. The times we've shared together mean so much to me, I wish I could make each moment last until eternity. When were apart I miss you and my heart aches, It makes me realize that I can't move on And that life without you would be a mistake. If I only had one chance with you. What can I do to make you see that your the only one for me? I know that there may be other girls, but none will love you more than me. If I only had one chance with you. I can show you why we belong together, I have to tell you why I need you in my life always and forever. I will give you my heart so please hold it tight, Just believe in me, you will have no regrets for this is something that is so right. All I ask is for you to give me just one chance. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Oh goodness Artemis! This is great! Truly heartwrenching but hopeful at the same time! You speak of your longing well! Thank You for this and welcome to the Corner Pub! Happy New Year! ~~Jamie    "...I mean, when I first met you, you were all like, 'Oh Phooey, I burned the darn muffins.' Now, you walk into a bar, and sailors come runnin' out!" |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Welcome to the Pub, Artermis.  Lots of good listeners here. This is a very nice first post, full of a longing I know only too well, having been here several times myself. I can only say someday you will find someone who really appreciates you and is worthy of all the love I see written in your heart. Hope its soon. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I welcome you too, Artemis.. I so enjoyed the longing of unrequited love in this wondefully written poem! Can't wait to see more lovely poems from your talented pen!Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Artemis! I hope you get your chance! Please check your email for a special Passions' welcome!! Denise |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Artemis, Welcome to the Pub. This poem is holding a lot of truth for me right now. Thank you for sharing it with us all. Dawn |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Welcome to the Pub Artemis. Sounds like you have a severe case of "being in love".  Hope you'll get your chance real soon. Great expression of how you feel !Happy New Year !! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Welcome! If she has the opportunity to read this wonderful poem, I'm sure she'll soon be yours. Melton |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions......hope you enjoy your stay. Beautiful post and good luck! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Welcome to the pub, Artemis.. great first post! ^_^ Hoping 2 see more.. Happy New Year! ^_^ Love, Lynne |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Hello Artemis..welcome home!!..very nice first post.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Hello Armetis Welcome to the pub.Thank you for sharing Look forward to more. Happy New year Suzanne |
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Artemis Junior Member
since 2000-12-31
Posts 15Toronto,Ontario,Canada |
Hi everyone, This poem is my first post and at first I was rather hesitant in sharing it because I wasn't sure if it was good enough for this list. I really enjoy reading poetry and I have read a lot of beautiful poems here. I was very happy that some of you took the time to read my poem and leave such nice encouraging comments. That meant a lot to me because this is the first time that I have ever let anyone read one of my poems. Thanks again for such kind words and for making me feel so welcome. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Wow! What a wonderful entrance into the Pub. Welcome and I hope you enjoy many visits. This poem hits close to my heart. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i am late with my welcome but am no less sincere... you have penned those sentiments well...just thought you will like to know that the old saying "whatever will be, will be" always gives me a lot of comfort during this trying times... hugs |
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Quiet One Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 46Shhhhh |
The intoxication of Love's infatuation The most wonderful gift from god (right after childbirth) Beautifully written |
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Artemis Junior Member
since 2000-12-31
Posts 15Toronto,Ontario,Canada |
I wrote this poem for someone who I have such strong feelings for. Problem is, I am too afraid to tell him out of fear of rejection. I don't want to lose him as a friend, I'd rather have that than to lose him completely. I was thinking of giving him this poem to tell him how I feel, but I am rather hesitant in doing so. I just don't know what to do. Thanks everyone for your kind words on my poem. Hearing them makes me a little more confident in getting the courage to actually share it with him one day. I hope I can do it. Thanks agiain. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Artemis... What a beautiful first post! Welcome to the Pub, you'll find lots of wonderful friends here. And as far as whether to tell him your feelings or not.... You'll miss 100% of the shots you never take! Good luck! Best |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Sad...and yet hopeful. Thats the way I look at life sometimes, and it is well illustrated here. Welcome to Passions. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Sad...and yet hopeful. Thats the way I look at life sometimes, and it is well illustrated here. Welcome to Passions. ~~My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, writhes in hatred, and dies in violence.~~ Myself |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
Wonderful, nicely done... and I have been there.. I can sympathise! Good work |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* just smiles...heart aching...remembering ...* excellent...far and away...and if he doesn't see...itruely pity him for what he will miss... Sol |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
as i type, i am sending this to my shadow "in all memories, sweet or sad, we find a small part of tomorrow" does this person know how you feel? Welcome to the Pub! Wonderful first post, great read Hope your new year is filled with chances with your "you" Alicia A. Renzelman |
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