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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Fierce Romance When the rain falls gently the roof sings with it's dance. I think of our best, poorest times arm in arm, celebrating our romance. As the air freshens and clears the earth smells like it's had a bath. Memories of our booth at the Honolulu telling wild tales of future and past. Now, when it rains the years fall away loving you more, but it's different. Everything for us then was fresh, clean our time and passion well spent. As the rain kisses our roof I remember your laugh, our wet feet. Your smile beneath the yard-sale umbrella as we kissed in the middle of our street. Years later, she smiles from her knitting memories!... as the rain begins it’s dance. Her gentle eyes question, fill me with yesterday a time of muttered love and fierce romance. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooo lovely, Daniel! I'd say you are both fortunate to share such lovely memories and each other! Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhh..love like this is rare and beautiful..you are so lucky to have it..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
What a lovely memory picture this is...I can just it. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thank y'all so much for the comments! Yes indeed, I have been muchly blessed! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
M, So has Wendy, Daniel.. so has she.. ^_^ Wow, I love this, as always.. Just think.. u'll soon be thinking back on THESE moments, with fond memory.. Well.. this is absolutely beautiful.. "the earth smells like it's had a bath." A poem greatly enjoyed.. Thanx for this.. Love, Lynne |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thanks Lynne! As always appreciate your comments and support! love ya back! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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