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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2000-12-29 06:16 PM


Three summer roses
cling in frozen remembrance
of beauty long past

© Copyright 2000 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2000-12-29 07:02 PM


Very pretty, Ellie.  Nice to remember summer in this weather.

Though it is freezing
In my heart it is toasty
Remembering love.

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To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn


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Denise
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2 posted 2000-12-29 10:16 PM


Very nice, both of them!! I wish I could write Haiku...can't seem to get the hang of it.

Denise

pegasus111
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ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-12-30 03:49 AM


the rose is such a beautiful way to express so many different emotions don't you think? your poem was lovely.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


wordancer
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4 posted 2000-12-30 04:30 AM


Nice ellie, I can just picture the crystelized roses, frozen in a moment of time.

"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-12-30 06:54 AM


Marilyn; How delightful is your Haiku!

Denise; thank you....I don't believe a word of it!!

Pegasus; You are always so encouraging...

Wordancer; Than you, I always look forward to your replies.

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



Suzanne Arlene
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6 posted 2000-12-30 09:03 AM


Oh Ellie i do so love your poems.I have 1 frozen rose. I thought about cutting it off  but i left it to remember summer when it bloomed so beautiful. Thank you Suzanne
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2000-12-30 10:03 AM


Your garden is delightful no matter the season
Liz

Dopey Dope
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8 posted 2000-12-30 12:02 PM


So beautiful...*sigh*



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


kaile
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9 posted 2000-12-30 07:01 PM


nice reflection, ellie....
2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
10 posted 2000-12-30 10:13 PM


You love your garden and it will soon return in the spring as beatiful as before.
Melton

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