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Bluejay In The Snow - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-12-26 08:48 AM

Contrast so lovely
as blue violets in snow
feathered wings so bright

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

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ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2000-12-26 10:52 AM

really neat analogy of wings to petals in this one..lovely, cold, peaceful.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

wordancer
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VA

2 posted 2000-12-26 11:07 AM

Oh, how lovely, took my breath away...

kaile

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singapore

3 posted 2000-12-26 12:55 PM

i ditto pegasus...nice work

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

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Presque Isle, ME

4 posted 2000-12-26 06:32 PM

Very pretty analogy! I never would have thought of comparing those colors, but it does seem right! Nice job, Ellie.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Denise

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5 posted 2000-12-27 11:33 AM

This is lovely, Ellie!

Denise

Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands

6 posted 2000-12-27 04:36 PM

Great job ellie !

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania

7 posted 2000-12-28 07:02 AM

Beautiful!
Liz

Dennis L. White
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Michigan, U.S.A.

8 posted 2000-12-28 07:17 PM

Ellie,
Beautiful haiku, the contrast is startling and sweet, nice work!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Dopey Dope

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2000-12-29 02:50 PM

This was a beautiful haiku.....A wonderful read.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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