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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
A rainbow is the color of my love, a starry night the view. A spring rain the feel of it, the scent of my love is you. The voice of my love is touch, the taste is that of candy. A diamond is the strength of it, the warmth is that of brandy. The sun is the truth of my love, and the gentle weight is dew. A rainbow is the color and, the scent, my love, is you. < !signature--> "Work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt and, dance like no one is watching." [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I liked this a lot..good piece.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Oh, this is lovely! All of the senses are engaged.  How pleased he must be!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Great imagery and sensory description in this poem! I love it! Great work! I could taste the Brandy! ~~Jamie   "...I mean, when I first met you, you were all like, 'Oh Phooey, I burned the darn muffins.' Now, you walk into a bar, and sailors come runnin' out!" |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahhhh... what a lovely poem childomine. |
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