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DawnG
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0 posted 2000-12-21 02:48 PM


I've been trying to write a special Christmas gift for a few very special friends of mine. I'm dedicating this to Kevin and Ria. I love you guys.  


A new friend came my way last May,
The timing perfect, a miracle you may say,
He lifted my spirits when I was down,
A smile I wore,
Never a frown.

Two months passed,
The summer was blessed,
Then a love was found,
Sending my emotions to the ground.

The friend I had,
I was sure was gone,
No time for me,
It made me sad.

But something happened I did not expect,
My friend still was there,
A friendship we did share.
He shared with me his new love,
Showing me unconditional love.

Though I may not see him as much,
A new friend I found from his touch,
Friends with whom I can laugh and cry,
Who love me for me, although I not know why.

The love we share,
Can never compare,
To anything I've felt,
You make my heart just melt.


© Copyright 2000 Dawn - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 2000-12-21 02:54 PM


A beautiful tribute, I am sure that Kevin and Ria will love it too.

"In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more
As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" Joy division

Moon Dust
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2 posted 2000-12-21 04:02 PM


Now thats true friendship, lovely poem

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
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3 posted 2000-12-21 04:47 PM


great works hun
i know they love it and are very happy to have someone in there life that cares so much  *hugs*
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

pegasus111
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4 posted 2000-12-21 04:53 PM


a great tribute..it's so nice to have friends like that..you are very lucky..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2000-12-21 07:10 PM


Dawn,
  You have some special friends there, but they have also found a true, dear friend, YOU! I am so glad you have them so close! Your poem is a tribute to these fine friends!
Well done!
Dennis :^)

Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 2000-12-22 10:31 AM


Dawn, Your poem is a treasure as much so as your friendship. One couldn't ask for a kinder friend than you have been.  My thanks to you for accepting me and for being there all the times I've needed.
                             ~Ria~

Wikket
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7 posted 2000-12-23 01:26 PM


Such love in this poem Dawn...I hope you two never part!  

~~Jamie


"Who does not love the Titanic?
...We all go: only a few, first-class."
--David R. Slavitt, 1983

ellie LeJeune
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8 posted 2000-12-23 01:38 PM


Dawn; Your lovely poem is filled with the gift of loves friendship, how very blessed your are!  Love, Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



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