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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2000-12-21 11:36 AM


u guys get me feelin festive too...nevertheless mi poem is still abit moody compared to ur lovely pieces...xmas resolutions and stuff lidat.....i guess u guys are looking forward to it! wish i could feel the same ... well gimme more of ur poems and i swear i'll feel better! u knoe, reading ur poems seems to be the oni cure whenever i'm depressed, juz like a gift of a cuddly bear. i'm super pleased to be part of this delightful family! merry xmas fellow poets!


love, michelle
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its snowing in my heart
beautiful but cold
flaky frosty mist unfolds
its time to make a start

christmas is coming
the year is ending
a brand new millennium comes
a kind of mixed feeling
surges thru the snow
like flaky unwillingness
and frosty uneasiness

what could haf caused this
startling experience
this beauty in my heart
i've never felt like this b4
like i could do somethin great
but its fading fast away
izit remorse or regret
or i wanna forget

closing my eyes
i take a deep breath
my soul travels down
into that chilly place
deep into my heart
i look around bewildered
seems like a miracle!

i've finally decided
its time to make a start
cos i say
its snowing in my heart




If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-21 04:57 PM


I see what you mean..hopeful but reserved..or is that resigned?...very well done..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Wikket
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
2 posted 2000-12-21 07:05 PM


I get the sense of this poem quite suddenly...mostly because I was there exactly 2 years ago today.  Took a lot of life and letting go to let me see I had the capacity to do great things, if I stopped worrying about the things I had done in the past.  I hope you find your courage...you are very talented!--Jamie     


"Who does not love the Titanic?
...We all go: only a few, first-class."
--David R. Slavitt, 1983

wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
3 posted 2000-12-21 08:26 PM


oh yes, keep looking past that cold place in your heart, and when it is time you will move on.



"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
4 posted 2000-12-21 09:58 PM


Michelle,

This is great. Merry Christmas to you as well.  

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
5 posted 2000-12-22 11:36 PM


pegasus111 - abit of both.....heee u seem to knoe mi quite well *_^

Jamie - really? oooh so i shall get over this then? thanks, really ! u're so sweet *S*

wordancer - i'll take ur advise ! cheers

Callie - *huGz* merry xmas dear


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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