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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
The seed has been planted, our hearts gently tilled. And when this love is sown, our lives shall then be filled. Our love is very strong, yet we are different, he and I. I dance along the ground as he soars throughout the sky. He smiles and my heart melts. I drown lazily within his eyes. The gentleness of his voice succeeds to warmly hypnotize. He lives within my spirit, within my soul and heart, possessing all that I am as he has right from the start. We're together, yet we're not, strong walls stand in our path. Sometimes love isn't enough to make good the aftermath. Will our hearts be shattered, as our love struggles to win, in a situation that can only stop the seed that did begin? [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
ooo i'm the first to read this yeah! hey childomine this love thing so strong i tink i'm gettin drunk! but its great and gimme more! i'm sure there's a sequel! don disappoint me kay? *winkZ* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
what an outstanding piece!!..loved it!! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
True true...love is the most difficult yet most rewarding challenge in your life. I hope that you both can find a way to surpass those obstacles. Let your love for one another break down those walls! --Jamie "Who does not love the Titanic? ...We all go: only a few, first-class." --David R. Slavitt, 1983 |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
love = persistence = love...as long as you both persist in the striving for your love, it will happen.< !signature--> "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." [This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 12-21-2000).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
He lives within my spirit, within my soul and heart, possessing all that I am as he has right from the start. ******** Beautiful words, childomine. Love is not easy in any circumstances, and sometimes seems almost impossible, but it's worth the striving.  Best wishes to you.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice to see you posting again... never really been in love so i have no comments but this was a beautiful soul-baring piece...i wish you well in the quest for your true love  |
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