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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-12-19 11:21 PM



we never questioned why--
we knew the reason
we were there;
you drew us into you,
as the moon tugs at the ocean...
we knew you--
better than we knew ourselves.
you were life
and we learned to love life
as never before.
you enhanced our vision
as you occupied our minds.
you kept us warm
entwined within our hearts.
you took up residence
in our souls
to forever be a part--
even now...
     even now,
as in the gentle arms of
the garden
your body is rocked
in peaceful sleep,
we can feel your life--
with no questions why;
you drew us in
to you...

-dgvarner
  11-93
for toby
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"the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'"  
-unknown




[This message has been edited by fallen rain (edited 12-19-2000).]

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kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2000-12-19 11:45 PM


Nice tribute, Gale.   (I checked out your link to Open.)  I love the new pic, too.  Some people do just have a magical effect on us, don't they?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
2 posted 2000-12-20 08:53 AM


A very quiet and gentle tribute...well put. Was a pleasent read for the first one this morning.

"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
3 posted 2000-12-20 11:07 AM


A wonderful tribute.  Emotions are well conveyed here!
Alicia A. Renzelman

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-12-20 05:52 PM


thanks MAR    toby was my original inspiration for writing poetry (at 14)..years later, while within many mths of writers block..i found out about his death.. not long after, i wrote this..  some people truly do have a magical affect on us..

WORDANCER..i thank you    glad you enjoyed..

ALICIA..i thank you too  

hugs, fallen



"the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'"
-unknown

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
5 posted 2000-12-20 10:20 PM


Enjoyed reading this, it sounds like an experience that I can relate to loving a special child.
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2000-12-21 12:56 PM


songbird..thank you for reading    and i hadnt thought of it in that light..glad it can reach more than one group of people  

hugs, fallen

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
7 posted 2000-12-21 09:18 AM


FR....

This is simply beautiful....and it flows wonderfully.

Best

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
8 posted 2000-12-26 08:00 PM


best..thank you much  

hugs, fallen

"the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'"
-unknown

shira
Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88
Hamburg, PA
9 posted 2000-12-27 12:17 PM


This is just wonderful... I can relate, having a special friend myself who evokes these feelings in me. Some people just have the ability in freeing parts of you that others do not. Very nice.
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
10 posted 2000-12-27 04:06 PM


This truly is a wonderful tribute. A soft, gentle and lovely poem. I loved it.  
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
11 posted 2000-12-29 11:17 PM


shira..thank you     he was a very special person in my life..i hope the person this one reminds you of is still around  

munda..glad you enjoyed it    thank you for reading

hugs, fallen


"the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'"
-unknown

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