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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Winds of Change The winds of change around my heart blew in a magnificent storm of love, branches arching touching the ground as a gateway to your wondrous sound. Catch me on a puffy cloud euphorically, passing galaxies in a fractions pace, glancing below the surface of soft air knowing the man I love is waiting there. Snows of Winter trickle upon our steps, slowly we wander through their beauty, hand in hand two pulses create unity of weathered beings upon love's community. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
How lovely! You caught me with the first two lines, and didn't let me down. "A magnificent storm of love"...What could be more wonderful?  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
A community thus, seen by two, Built by loving hands of truth. Winter snows upon the ground, Blessed in love with you I've found. Time and space merging as one, Eons from now our loves not done. Limbs of trees touch window panes, Thus our love grows the same. Seeing green within your eyes, Winter clouds cover the sky. Spring will soon come around, Nature tuning your loving sound. Through all seasons soon to come, My loving life for you, is not done. Though decades will rapidly pass, By your side I love you lass. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." [This message has been edited by kelieth (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
aaah..ain't love grand?....I really enjoyed this.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful poem, sounds like true love to me. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lost Dreamer, Beautiful poem of love and might I add a beautiful response by Kelieth! I'm happy for you both! Keep writing! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful!! Denise |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow, Ria...this is stunning! Incredible job, and I think the rhyme is cool!!!! Impressive, definitely the best I've seen today!  Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
oooo ria! tis a delightfully heartwarming piece ... is love really somethin worth looking forward to? thought-provoking ...... tat's wat ur literature does 4 me too love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hand in hand two pulses create unity of weathered beings upon love's community terrific sentiments penned in a terrific way..thanx for the read |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I Thank you all for your wonderful responses, I wish you all the merriest of holiday's.
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem Ria and a beautiful reply Kevin.  Good to learn "true love" still exists.(((((((((hugs)))))))) |
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