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bb4thunder
Junior Member
since 2000-12-17
Posts 12
Berkeley, CA, U.S.A

0 posted 2000-12-17 10:19 PM





Dedicated to my best friend
Koko
who encourages me
and inspires my poetry.

WORDS

Words to heal your heart my dear
Should be whispered in your ear
Soft and cuddley warm should be
All that's shared 'tween you and me

Healing words that we can share
Waifting sweetness in the air
Words designed to heal the scar,
Telling you how great you are

Words that you can hold on to,
Words that flow 'tween me and you
Words of comfort, words to soothe
Words to cause your heart to move

All the words while you are near
To calm your heart and still your fear
Words that warm you in the night
Words that hold you oh so tight

Softly words your ears caress,
Leave our love to do the rest.
To soothe your mind and heal your soul
To bind the wounds and make you whole

By

Thunder



© Copyright 2000 Thunder - All Rights Reserved
Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2000-12-17 11:03 PM


That was lovely, and the music was wonderful! I wish I knew how to do that!
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-12-17 11:34 PM


This is lovely Thunder, where would we be without them hey? I enjoyed  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
3 posted 2000-12-18 12:07 PM


This was very sweet and such a nice selection of music to inhance your very lovely poem. You are so appreciated, my very dear friend! hugs...

Hope you are having Happy Holidays in California! Merry Christmas, Thunder!



Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-12-18 08:34 AM


thunder ..you do have a way with words    this is very wonderful for you friend koko  

and how nice the serenade....  

hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.


pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
5 posted 2000-12-18 08:41 AM


simply lovely..yes, you do have a way with words..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
6 posted 2000-12-18 11:31 PM


How peaceful and soothing this is, a real pleasure to read.

"Come...dance with me, in my world of words."

shira
Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88
Hamburg, PA
7 posted 2000-12-19 12:19 PM


This was very very nice and soothing... and funny that we should both have posted a poem by the same name, and the are total opposites! Nice read.
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