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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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wounded by truth the night pierces my heart river of tears the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Beautiful, but sad, Pegasus. You've started a little rivulet with me. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pegasus, This is beautiful but so very sad...I pray you are being comforted by friends or family. I too have had some bad news lately and am praying my way through it thanks to much support. Ellie< !signature--> Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes, i have been there...the truth really hurts at times and sometimes i wonder if i should indulge in the lies so that i wont feel so bad... good senryu..i hope you are feeling better soon.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ouch! peg, this one hurts so much...  however, in my personal experience..i find that i'd much rather know the truth, even if it hurts, than to be ignorant, or lied to.. also, i've found that if you let the hurt in..feel it..and let it go..then it goes sooner than later  take care of you..hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
…truth; although it hurts terribly, is a cleansing pain which brings new understanding and acceptance of the limitations of our world... -WO |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Pegasus, This is a touching senryu, touching the emotions that accompany heartfelt pain! Well done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
light of the new day infuses this heart with hope the garden calls me for you, wordancer... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great! I fully enjoyed this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
...peg, the garden calls for both of us... |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
Very nice poem that is oh so true! |
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