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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When All The Yesterdays Are Gone ~*Marge Tindal*~ When all the yesterdays are gone and tomorrow's promise looms brightly on the horizon I'll search for you in clouds anew finding the sunshine of you in my vision. I'll play with you in sunbeams dancing across the lawn. Laugh at the memories we're making to last through until dawn. On each new tomorrow, we will find a way, to carry forward the memories etched in yesterday. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This shows that we all have hope for another day...I like the way you portray it in this poem. --Little Girl |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
This is so BEAUTIFUL Marge.. I love the last stanza.. "On each new tomorrow, we will find a way, to carry forward the memories etched in yesterday." mm, such a perfect vision! ^_^ Love, Lynne |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
yes Marge, the last stanza great..liked this a lot the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhh Marge how I love laughing at those special memories..."etched in every yesterday"~just beautiful. Bonnie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Lovely my friend . . . simply lovely.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
when all the yesterdays are gone, new beginnings are discovered! oh marge this is so lovely and hopeful! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
How lovely Marge... yes when all the yesterdays are gone, there's always tomorrow.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ALittleGirl~ There is so much promise in the memories carried forward. Thank you for your reply. YuLan~ Thank you so much. Yes - there is a vision of tomorrow written with the penning of today. Pegasus~ So pleased you enjoyed it. Bonnie~ Each and every tomorrow has the ink of yesterday written on the heart. LoneWolf~ Thank you so much my friend. MidnightBlues~ Thank you. Yes, there is hope for a brighter tomorrow. Munda~ As we reach for tomorrow - we must take yesterday with us. Thanks so much for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
wow this is jest what i neede to remember today thanks for the read!  I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Marge, What would we do without memories? I wouldn't feel like me at all. "Etched in yesterday" Love that line! *Joy...to the world* |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem and beautifully penned. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Great, Marge! I find that the older I get, the more I remember the "yesterdays". They are easier to deal with than the unknown tomorrow. Love and hugs, ME  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hi Marge! Beautiful poem! But of course! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RaleighBttrfly~ Glad to share with you. Joy~ Would be a lonely world indeed, if we did not have our memories to wrap our hearts against the cold. Lord, give me still my memories long after I am old. DD~ Thank you so much. MotherEarth~ Ahh, the yesterdays are what write us into our tomorrows. *Hugs* Denise~ Good to see you ! Thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Geesh, I have to chase you around just to say "hey! I like this" but if I asked you to stay in one place...then all of this SUNSHINE wouldn't be brightening the place up as you do so well... good one Marge! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks, Marge! Nice to see you again too! I've been sick this past week and just now starting to feel better. Boy, that was the longest week of my life without all my wonderful poet friends! Denise |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
i really liked this Good job*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Marge... just lovely as always....tomorrow is always just around the corner. Wonderfully done. Best |
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