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SystemErroR
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0 posted 2000-12-16 03:50 PM


As long as there is a moon above
When I look into the sky...

As long as there is a glow of love
when I gaze into your eyes...

Then I'll feel free to take your hand
Sharing tears, my fears, loves' bond...

I'll love you Leigh with all my heart
Up to the moon...and beyond.


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BSC
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1 posted 2000-12-16 10:08 PM


Beautifully written thoughts for your special little someone... Bonnie
Lady Lost
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2 posted 2000-12-17 10:22 AM


This is so sweet!  I hope you frame a copy for her...she will cherish this poem forever!

...beth

bb4thunder
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since 2000-12-17
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3 posted 2000-12-17 10:29 AM


Very nice poem.. I liked it very much..I was curious that there seems to be a conditional touch to it.. Keep up the good work!!
Thunder

SystemErroR
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4 posted 2000-12-17 11:32 AM


I understand how you can take that...however...Leigh is autistic..and she loves unconditionally.    And as far as the moon...I am certain it will be faithful to all of us who count on its appearance at night..*smiles*
Sock
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since 2000-11-27
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5 posted 2000-12-18 01:05 AM


That was really beautiful - Ever since watching Mercury Rising with Bruce Wills I believe Autistic people are the most generous and lovable people.  I'm sure your daughter will love it.

Thank you for such a great read.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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6 posted 2000-12-18 08:13 AM


system..this is very sweet..i'm sure your daughter will cherish this if you hang it on her wall for her to see  

hugs, g

"the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'"
-unknown

Munda
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7 posted 2000-12-18 05:43 PM


This little poem beholds such beauty. Loved it.  
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