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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
And soar to distant dreaming, Up above the clouds. < !signature--> Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. [This message has been edited by Maria Byrne (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
oh my....I really like this one..being partial to winged creatures and all...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very whimsical feel to it.... |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I do love to watch hawks in flight. It seems so carefree, doesn't it? This is one of my favorites of yours. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I am feeling giddy at the height this one soars to. wonderful poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ Aloft soaring wing Flight of falcon beckoning Calling dreams to fly *You do these so well ... Thanks always for the inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow I love the image you've painted for us. I love the idea of flying, and thus loved this haiku very much. Great job on this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Pegasus - u too? thanxKaile - Yeah got my head in the clouds KCS - yeah I'd love to fly taBrian - LOL, Thanx Marge - Glad always to give you the inpiration and thank u too Dopey - Me too taLife has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Wind supports thy wing Soar new heights with measured grace Gravity ignored Lovely haiku image! Dennis :^) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautifully expressed, I love the second line! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Awww thanks guys Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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