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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-12-12 07:32 PM



Ice coated branches

Sparkle in the morning sun

Crystal radiance

12-12-2000


© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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Arkansas
1 posted 2000-12-12 08:05 PM


You make me cold
only to warm me up
Beautiful

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-12-12 08:28 PM



ice crystals
a southern dream
Florida sun

lol..nice piece Dennis

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-12-12 11:23 PM


Sparkling ice crystals
Deceptively are hiding
Pretty destruction.

Nice job, as always, Dennis, and this truly is a lovely picture, but we are still smarting from an ice storm of almost three years ago.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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4 posted 2000-12-13 06:40 AM


Dennis~

Lighting up the morn
Sparkling crystals of adorn
Dance on the dawning


~*Marge*~
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ellie LeJeune
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King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-12-13 06:56 AM


Lovely crystal tears
winters morning spring so deep
neath her icy storm

Beatiful, Dennis...You are so masterful at these little wonders. love, Sis


Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-12-13 07:48 AM


I'm all iced in here
And not going anywhere
Glad to have you near!

Everything is closed
Freezing rain coats all our roads
Slippery fun kids know!

Wanted Christmas white
My orders messed up, all right
Back order in sight?

Thanks Dennis for getting us started on the Icestorm theme--God has provided the illustrations!  
              Yo'Bro,  David


To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White)



shira
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since 2000-12-12
Posts 88
Hamburg, PA
7 posted 2000-12-13 12:30 PM


Dirty ice crystals
Hanging from long horse whiskers
Winter ornaments

Nice thread started here! Everyone's additions are wonderful too!

-Shira

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2000-12-13 01:10 PM


Funny how those ice storms can be so pretty  but so devastating as well.Great poem  
kaile
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singapore
9 posted 2000-12-14 10:07 AM


i like the calm, serene read here..
Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
10 posted 2000-12-14 10:42 AM


Loved it Dennis.  
brian madden
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ireland
11 posted 2000-12-14 05:04 PM


If only Irish winters were as beautiful.... wonderful poem.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Moon Dust
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12 posted 2000-12-14 06:51 PM


Ah for a minute I was there

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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13 posted 2000-12-15 03:40 PM


This was beautiful!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA
14 posted 2000-12-15 05:12 PM


In it's aftermath
My power being out for days
It's beauty, all gone.

As I wander out
Devastation everywhere
Trees and Lines brought down.

How can crystal bright
Wonders of nature so neat
wreak such ugliness?

Boy, did we get a dose of it!!!!!



To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White)



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
15 posted 2000-12-17 02:57 AM


well of course i love this..!  
i used to live in north carolina..the crystal covered branches in the winter were sooo beautiful!  

btw..i recently found your 'weary traveler' in my download file!!  wow!  very wonderful THAT was  

keep up the great writing den!    
hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.

bb4thunder
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since 2000-12-17
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Berkeley, CA, U.S.A
16 posted 2000-12-17 09:26 AM


very nice imagery, enjoyable read.. nice to meditate..  Thunder.
kindasorta
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17 posted 2000-12-18 07:39 PM


interesting!  I feel like I just read a summary sheet.  yes, sometimes lasting years kc???  talk about hang on's!  it was pretty but it will be messy marvin.
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