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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
You think your wings are bound And now your destined for the ground Well you better get up and you best move around Its time to play catch up, and take a look what I found Sure your hearts broken, or so you think Hearts only bend, and your pain will shrink But my soul is weak, its rotten, it smells it stinks I've been further than the edge, and made friends on the brink I'm not saying you're lying, I know its for real But I can only have so much pity for the way that you feel The bases you steal, and for whom you will kneel Its only ideal that you reveal but there is no appeal You're right I'm angry, guess you wanna know why Its all the world and me, but I'm not gonna lie I loved just once and everyday since, I die I cry, I try, but still you just pry I'm a shell, a cast, I'm not really here I'm in hell, at last, I'm nowhere thats near I died a long time ago and dried as a tear I realize its time to go You better get into gear Celebrate life all alone on this big blue sphere And you should cheer Now you're all in the clear Have a very merry Christmas, and enjoy your new year |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
wow!! this is like a Christmas greeting from Christmas past...lol..good read. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Hmmm... I liked the two lines "I died a long time ago And dried as a tear." alot for some reason. Good read. |
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dena*mystrawberries Junior Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 15 |
bob, i sent this to someone who recently had their heart torn out...they wanted me to tell you it was wonderful...he is goning through the same thing and the little twit keeps jabbing that knife in deeper.... my favorite line was the last...lol..the holiday wishes...should i ever desire to make someone that angry, i think i shall read your poem and save myself from the self hatred that would result... i enjoyewd this very much |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Pegasus--->*LOL* Yeah, I guess I can see that in there! Thanks for responding! B_W_A--->I liked that line a lot too...Feeling like a part of you has died and evaporated. Thanks for responding! Dena--->Wow, thanks for shuffling this piece around and putting it to work. Twits like he and I will always jab the knife deeper, dogs will bark, babies will cry...its just a simple fact! *L* Glad you liked it, thanks for responding! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Is funny how once in awhile we need to kick our own you no what Just to bump start us back to reality.great read Suzanne |
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