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Songbird
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0 posted 2000-12-10 10:31 PM


  

The Pink Moon

Just above the horizon
The moon hung
Blushing pink
Just beyond my sight
The sun threw her a kiss
And that is why she blushed
I think


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-12-11 12:18 PM


SongBird~
This is just a delightful glimpse
of that little flirt of a moon.
And what a quick move by that little sun of a gun !

I really enjoyed this.
~*Marge*~


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kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2000-12-11 12:24 PM


This is charming!  So much freshness in so few words!  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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3 posted 2000-12-11 12:50 PM


Songbird, smiling here  
this filled me with warmth, beautiful!

Maree

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and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


pegasus111
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4 posted 2000-12-11 07:47 AM


wonderful read..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Munda
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5 posted 2000-12-11 11:06 AM


I love this  
Broken_Winged_Angel
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6 posted 2000-12-11 11:24 PM


So that's why the moon turns such a delightful shade of red on occassion... Really enjoyed this!!
Severn
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7 posted 2000-12-12 07:14 AM


A lovely perspective...

thanks for the read...

shira
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8 posted 2000-12-12 11:15 AM


This was very nice, and displayed wonderful imagery.

-shira.

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9 posted 2000-12-12 01:02 PM


This is really cute. Thanks for sharing it with us.

                                 Dawn

Irish Rose
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10 posted 2000-12-12 03:52 PM


This is such an original piece, wow!
I mean, it really touched me....


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of someone else." Marilyn Monroe



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11 posted 2000-12-12 06:29 PM


I really liked this poem. Very creative!!


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Songbird
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12 posted 2000-12-12 06:49 PM


Thank guys, that pink moon was just begging me to tell his story. Surprized myself on this one.
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