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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2000-12-07 09:52 PM


Winter finery
in all her pristine beauty
lacy white and pure
covers winters nakedness
to cloak her in royal robes


Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



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pegasus111
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1 posted 2000-12-08 12:59 PM


eloquence, thy name is Ellie...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-12-08 03:22 PM


this was so beautiful!!!!!!!!!! thank you for sharing this!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


BSC
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3 posted 2000-12-08 09:31 PM


In a word....lovely Ellie.... What a beautiful image... Bonnie
Denise
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4 posted 2000-12-09 12:08 PM


Very beautiful, Ellie!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2000-12-09 10:51 AM


Ellie,
  What a lovely portrayal of the beauty witnessed this time of year. You make it sound delightful (Brrrrr) well, almost!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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6 posted 2000-12-09 11:31 AM


enjoyed the read..esp liked the last two lines
kcsgrandma
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7 posted 2000-12-09 12:32 PM


Very pretty, Ellie.  I do so prefer winter in her royal robes, to the stark nakedness of this time of year.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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