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None.....As of Yet

SystemErroR
Junior Member

since 2000-12-03

Posts 13

0 posted 2000-12-06 11:35 AM

From dusk comes the darkness
our playground of dreams...
where what is and what isn't
is not what it seems

The crepe it unfolds
rendering colors, unhued...
creating distance between lovers
creating one heart from two

But time has no equal
for darkness grows weak
with the first shards of light
penetrating dawn's early sleep

She rises alongside me
my lover, my friend...
perpetuating the circle of life
dusk to dawn, never end

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 2000-12-06 12:18 PM

Wow, I really like this poem, it sent my mind reeling in thought of how each minute of every day encompasses my life, and how much more I need to see. Welcome to Passions, may your stay here with us be delightful

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

2 posted 2000-12-07 03:54 AM

I thought for a moment, that I was opening the same poem that I read earlier.. I'm glad I went ahead and opened this one too.. It rocks.

Can't wait to read more.

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

3 posted 2000-12-07 05:38 AM

very well done..excellent read

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

4 posted 2000-12-07 11:21 AM

Both of your poems posted here were beautiful, you certainly have a gift of poetic words.

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