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Along The Line Man Became Civilized
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Along The Line Man Became Civilized Behold the beauty before me brushed swept sky’s of crimson hues. So tenderly the orb of day embarks upon its journey steadily coming guaranteed. Whimsical breeze dancing through semi baron trees tossing brightly colored leaves into the air for one last dance. Coming awake Nature stirs, soft melodies begin to fill stilled air, upon the ground dew kissed, the creatures of the land tip toe with careful step. Humanity of yet does not own this day, the moment belongs to serenity and enables those who wish to enjoy the awesome beauty beheld before them in complete peace. If not for what man thinks is important they earth would dance in sheer delight before us day and night, but some were along the line man became civilized. The moral intellectual achievement’s of mans culture has destroyed and pushed Nature to the brink of none existence and calamity. Becoming masters of the earth rather than partners has actually ensured are downfall and demise. Forgetting that if cherished Nature could sustain life completely and fulfill your hearts desires with pure joy and contentment. By meager means man could exist, dwelling in harmony and the spirit could grow to its fullest with just they abundance the earth has to offer. But some were along the line man became civilized. “Oh” to contemplate what “if” we took a different path, made different choices, what if! By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi everyone, I just wanted to kind of explain myself a little here OK, I don't mean in this poem that we would of been better off as cave men, rather if when we were becoming civilized we would of taken more care of our earth and made some smarter choices along the way to ensure that this place of beauty would be here in all its splender for ever, its so wonderful to be able to enjoy the beauty and splender, I hope that all in the future have this same chance. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
right on!! You have to sneer at man's so called progress. it seems anywhere you find "civilazation" you find destruction,and it's very sad. *sigh* humans are a cruel race. sam "Though thy crest be shorn and shaven,thou "i said" art sure no craven." Ghastly grim and ancient raven,wandering from the nightly shore,tell me what |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Sweet. I totatally agree with you... Our idea of "civilized" now isn't all its cracked up to be.. Specially with our world dying around us.. Well done.  |
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