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The World Not Yet Awake

raleighbttrfly
Member

since 2000-11-21

Posts 160
Raleigh NC

0 posted 2000-12-05 07:11 PM

There is a peace I find with the coming of the dawn
A quite stillness that matches the pale morning
No sun yet to glare no stars to distract
Now I find my self, wondering back

Back to you my love to the mornings when I knew your love
We would lye awake jest past dreaming
Holding each other not yet thinking of the duties that would come with the day

I look back to then and smile still
Are love was new and are harts naive
But we would lye there and whisper of how we hoped it would be

This morning, still predawn is calm, and quite the world not yet awake
So a few minutes I will take and give them to you
We have gone are own ways
Grown up and so apart
I feel no anger no hate
But how I miss those times jest before the world was awake

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

1 posted 2000-12-05 11:04 PM

beautiful. Reminds me of my one true love.

Dawn

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

2 posted 2000-12-06 11:45 AM

I remember those moments too. New love is wonderful isn't it? But always later, the responsibilities of life creep in and take over...
I really enjoyed your poem!

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2000-12-07 07:38 AM

Gosh this brings back memories.......no love no hate...yeah kinda special but farnie feelin... keep on posting, raleighbttrfly, its great!

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-12-08 03:19 PM

this was great. i liked this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

raleighbttrfly
Member

since 2000-11-21

Posts 160
Raleigh NC

5 posted 2000-12-08 10:12 PM

thank you all so much for reading and replying,and saying such nice things. Glade you all liked it.

Beginnings are scary, endings are usually sad, but it’s the middle that counts.

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