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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-12-05 03:25 PM


Cold wintery breath,
On window pane comforted,
By fiery blaze,


Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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pegasus111
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1 posted 2000-12-05 03:30 PM


very nice images here..could it be the night before Christmas?..hohoho!!  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Dennis L. White
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2 posted 2000-12-05 04:57 PM


Maria,
  Brrrrrr, who is comforting whom? Time to throw another log on the fire! Nice imagery!
Dennis :^)
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Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 12-05-2000).]

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3 posted 2000-12-05 06:40 PM


Oh, what a cozy read....beautiful!  Bonnie
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4 posted 2000-12-09 12:32 PM


dig the contrast between the first and third lines..well done
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5 posted 2000-12-09 01:10 PM


Wonderful!...As the winter cold stays out, i am nice and toasty in. *relaxes and drinks some hot coco*



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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