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raleighbttrfly
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC

0 posted 2000-12-04 11:41 AM





Best friends forever
Do any thing for each other
That’s what you always said
But you left me lonely
You made other plans

Now I think of all the things we shared
I always had a shoulder to bare
Now its you turn and you weren’t there
Hot tears roll down cold cheeks
I am so angry and so weak

So many of my secrets you have to keep
So many of my hopes you said couldn’t wait to see come true
Now betrayed I wait for your weak apology
The kind that can only come from you

You did not see my need
Allen you noticed too late
Maybe this time I won’t wait
I wont be there the next time you hart brakes

I always had something to give
You always saw fit to take
You took me for granted
Now it’s too late


© Copyright 2000 Amberlyn - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-12-04 02:01 PM


Let Allen see this. He could of been use to you always being the one to help him and didn't realize that you were hurting this time. It is never to late.
Your feelings were beautifully described.

raleighbttrfly
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
2 posted 2000-12-04 04:13 PM


Thank you for your response. Allen and I have been friends for more than 2 years now. He moved out of town about 5mths ago, but we talk atlest twice a week. this pome is about how we had planed to have a joint b-day party together for about 4mths but he canceled at the last min. I think I will let him read this, I know it's not to late but he has some makeing up to do. Agine thanks for the response
kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-12-04 06:02 PM


It's such an awful feeling to be let down by someone you trusted!  Hope this works out for you.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

raleighbttrfly
Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
4 posted 2000-12-04 10:34 PM


Thank you Kcsgrandma for your reply and for taking the time to read my pome.It is sad for me to think that I may lose this friend, and that he could let me down. But its nice to know that you caerd enogh to whish the best for me, I hope it works out too.
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
5 posted 2000-12-05 12:53 PM


talk bout takin it for granted, i've had my share and this really brings nostalgy back to me! from today onwards, its gotta be u u understand? bless u raleighbttrfly, no more heartbreaks ok? *huGz* to soothe ur pain, gosh this is really really direct and 'whammm' it hits me in the eye. Love it!Keep posting!!!


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

raleighbttrfly
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
6 posted 2000-12-05 01:09 AM


thank you midnight for the time you took to read this pome and for your encouragement
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