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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-03 01:25 PM


So Tempting

To lean against, fantasy
Open wide it's destiny
Unfolding
Can't you feel the empathy,
Awaiting arms, setting free
She's reaching

Currents building, rushing in
Levels rising to your fill
Cresting, cold
Approaching shadows, drawn within
Dark descending, silent, still
Thoughts on hold

Bodies listing, shadows dance
Tilting meanings, second chance
You uphold
Arrow pierces, heart to lance
Leaning towards she, taking stance
Life unfolds....

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


© Copyright 2000 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-03 03:04 PM


mmmm..hauntingly beautiful.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-12-03 03:37 PM


Wow i really liked this one!!
keep it up!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2000-12-03 10:54 PM


hmmm if I had permission I would show you the poem that I  responded to with this..I will send you to the site and you can see for yourself...I love to copy a pattern that is unique..*s
http://bookcase.bianca.com/shack/bookcase/poetry/posts/2000_Dec_03/27168/27168.html
thank you pegasus

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2000-12-03 10:56 PM


hi there sweet one..   haven't seen you much  but then again I have been keeping sort of low...thanks for your comment

~~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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