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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-12-03 08:50 AM


Snowflakes in the wind

Like a shaken up snowglobe

Who just shook my world?


12-3-2000

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-12-03 09:00 AM


World turned upside down
and then shaken up a bit
magic then is seen

I cuoldn't help jump in, this is so magical and inspiring! Another jewel in thy majestic Haiku crown!  Love, Sis P.U.Y.M.B.


Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME
2 posted 2000-12-03 09:53 AM


Dennis, I love snow globes, but never thought of snow as an earth-shaking experience.   Interesting perspective.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-12-03 12:42 PM


very very nice Dennis.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-12-03 03:33 PM


Wow, I really enjoyed this one.




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


deleeme
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5 posted 2000-12-03 08:21 PM


A wonderful wintertime perspective--
We see the hardships of the colder months, we might as well enjoy the compensating beauties as well.
Another delightful verse,Bro!
            Love,  David

To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White)



kaile
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6 posted 2000-12-04 01:00 AM


hi dennis,

you seem to incorporate a darker tone in your haiku/senryu offerings these days...that
last line "why am i so blue" from your Why haiku just echoes in my mind every now and then

and now this one...its nice to witness the grwoth of a poet, dennis

INclan
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since 1999-07-20
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Indiana, USA
7 posted 2000-12-05 07:58 AM


Dennis,

Well done.  I enjoyed your use of a ? to end your poem.  Of course, one might also end with a statement: God just shook my world...
Indeed an interesting observation and perspective!  WRITE MORE!

INclan

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
8 posted 2000-12-06 11:57 AM


Dennis, Such a delightful Haiku you wrote here, and at the moment it seems someone just shook the snowglobe outside my window. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent here with us  
DawnG
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9 posted 2000-12-06 04:09 PM


Nice work here. Yes someone did shake the snow globe outside my window as well here this morning. Shook my world all up and seems to have shaken my blah mood up into a great mood.  

                                   Dawn

Romy
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10 posted 2000-12-06 08:52 PM


Very nice, as always Dennis!
Cerenity
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Escondido-California
11 posted 2000-12-07 01:02 AM


Hi Dennis,

Wonderful poetry, I love snow from a far, yep real far away, or a globe would be wonderful too, born and raised in sunny California, loved this one thank you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



midnightblues
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Singapore
12 posted 2000-12-07 08:26 AM


surreal yet cheeky......hehehe this is so cute!


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

fractal007
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13 posted 2000-12-07 06:53 PM


Sweet poem!  Nice how you started with something seemingly on the outside, and then brought it in.  Interesting style
Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
14 posted 2000-12-10 03:00 PM


Dennis, you always make haiku sound so easy, while I know how hard they are to write. I hope you never cease to amaze me like you did just now.
Denise
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15 posted 2000-12-10 04:03 PM


Wonderful, as always, Dennis!

Denise

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