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Romy
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0 posted 2000-12-02 01:25 PM


Can you see the brilliant star?
Heavens gift, sent to help us
Remember  the way back
Into a way of life we
Seem to have forgotten.
Too much sadness, greed and pain, but
Maybe, if we follow the light,
All will be well in the world,
Someday…



© Copyright 2000 Deborah L. Carter - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2000-12-02 01:48 PM


I am impressed!  You get the message across beautifully here!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-12-02 03:27 PM


WOW! This is so beautifully done and perfectly said! Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-12-02 08:30 PM


Debbie~
Without question - LOVELY !
An impressive acrostic with a powerful punch !
~*Marge*~



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4 posted 2000-12-02 09:56 PM


This was great. I liked this one a lot!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2000-12-03 09:01 AM


Debbie,
  Beautiful message in a wonderful package!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Romy
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6 posted 2000-12-03 10:07 AM


Thanks to each of you for your kind replies!

pegasus111
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7 posted 2000-12-03 12:40 PM


this is wonderful, Debbie

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kaile
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8 posted 2000-12-04 12:50 PM


such promise of hope in this piece...perfect for the upcoming festival...

i will hope too

Romy
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9 posted 2000-12-04 12:34 PM


Pegasus111 and Kaile,
Thank-you! I'm glad you liked it!

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10 posted 2000-12-04 03:33 PM


No other poem decribes christmas so well

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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