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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-12-01 08:28 PM


You live in me
You pull at my heart strings
You turn my soul upside down
You make me want to run out my door
And keep running
Until I’ve found someone I can help
You test me
You keep faith in me
When I fail to do what You know I can do
You are that will
That never goes away
You are that spring
That keeps on flowing
You are the tears that well up in my eyes
You are the inspiration
You make the inspiration
That make those wet drops
You motivate
You celebrate
You take my hands,
Give me a keyboard
And find the words
To fill a poem
With more than words..
love, hope, kindness,
That might change someone’s life
Thank You, God

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
1 posted 2000-12-01 11:54 PM


Very nice, you're words of sincerity and faith, shine in your poem!
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-12-02 02:56 AM


Joy, Loveliest poem of your oneness with God. It's only then do we know the fullness of life as He meant us to live it and our senses come alive to all the wonder and beauty around us. Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
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3 posted 2000-12-02 08:05 AM


this a lovely way to say thanks to all he's given

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-12-02 10:59 AM


Joy~
This is wonderful !

'You make me want to run out my door
And keep running
Until I’ve found someone I can help'


Now THAT'S what pleases Him most.
Spread that JOY !  
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
5 posted 2000-12-03 10:25 PM


a wonderful inspirational poem, Joy..thank you for sharing  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
6 posted 2000-12-04 08:44 AM


Simple and sweet! Long time no see *winkZ*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
7 posted 2000-12-04 08:02 PM


Hey all. I was feeling very inspired from something, not sure what, when I wrote this.
It felt really good. I felt a part of the world, a real part you know? Anywho, thanks for replying.
Everyone have Happy Holidays!

Joy...to the world  

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