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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
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0 posted 2000-12-01 02:59 AM


Rotten Fruit

What does one do
when once called friend
stabs, cuts to the bone?
Others incomplete report
twisted to suit twisted
branding the one stabbed?

Once called friend
threatens, reprimands
accuses stabee of bad attitude.
Well now...you push away
ignore, mistreat and cause agony
and then expect smiles?

One can’t help it if...
truth lays bare, exposes
the tell resulting in anger.
Present pursuit of popularity
suddenly so very important
clouds your reason, ex-friend.

Write it up in anger
I guess I shall follow suit
lucky to have a job, indeed.
You have throw away, discarded
a friendship eternal
just doing your nasty job.




bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"



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pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-01 07:45 AM


this happened to me once..it is never pleasant and it never goes away..good luck.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2000-12-01 10:41 AM


wow...it cuts to the bone alright..You made me wonder...and hope I never treat someone that way  ((hugzz))

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2000-12-01 02:16 PM


Great post! It really shows intense feeling.  keep it up!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Tramp Poet
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
4 posted 2000-12-03 10:14 AM


Thnak you each for your support and comments.
Angry emotionalism, eh?


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"



midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
5 posted 2000-12-04 08:32 AM


oUcH! beary beary painfullllllll!!!!


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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