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pegasus111
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0 posted 2000-11-29 11:36 PM


deep snow blanket
silent frozen pond-
glassy reflections


the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2000-11-30 12:05 PM


Very pretty picture, but very cold!  I'm glad for my fleece blanket.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-11-30 06:49 AM


Pegasus; Lovely scene of winters cold beauty!


Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



kaile
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3 posted 2000-11-30 11:34 AM


very nice...i immediately thought of little children crowding around the frozen pool, eager to look at themselves....
Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-11-30 12:23 PM


Pegasus,
  A chilling but lovely view of winter!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



blackhalo
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5 posted 2000-11-30 12:40 PM


I can't wait to ice skate again!  Been doin' it for 7 years, ain't about to quit!!! LOL!  
Lovely & accurate picture of winter, in some places...  
Alicia

INclan
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6 posted 2000-11-30 02:17 PM


Pegasus111,

WELL DONE, well written and with only 8 words.  I like this very much.

INclan

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7 posted 2000-11-30 06:14 PM


Lovely makes me think of chrismas too

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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8 posted 2000-11-30 07:41 PM


Pegasus~
You certainly got the image across in a teensy little write.
Enjoyed the poem - but not the cold.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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9 posted 2000-11-30 08:04 PM


Lovely scene...as long as you are on the inside looking out!!

Denise

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10 posted 2000-11-30 09:48 PM


A wonderful picture to envision......but cold......brrrrrrrrrr...



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


pegasus111
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11 posted 2000-11-30 11:31 PM


thanks to all that responded to my little frigid ditty..you are the greatest.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


JOY 14
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12 posted 2000-12-01 08:42 PM


Sounds like home in Wisconsin alright.
Burr, is it cold here, but beautiful with the snow.

Joy

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