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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-11-29 08:35 PM


Small white fairy lights
twinkle o'er the rose arbor
a hundred Fairies
mystic lights upon the snow
winter garden bright once more


Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



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bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
1 posted 2000-11-29 08:43 PM


Ellie...

Looking out the window to try to catch a peek at them...This is delightful..wonderful job, my friend.

Best

BSC
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2 posted 2000-11-29 09:23 PM


Even in the winter your gardens just shine Ellie...This is soooooo beautiful.  Bonnie
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-11-29 10:59 PM


mouth open in awe..I have this vision of hundreds of fairies riding on the backs of fireflies..soooo good, ellie

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2000-11-29 11:59 PM


What a pretty picture has been painted by your pen, Ellie!  I can see it perfectly!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2000-11-30 06:56 AM


Ellie,
  So majestically you have once again captured your beautiful garden, a garden that will not fade, for your love keeps it in bloom.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Dennis L. White
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6 posted 2000-11-30 06:57 AM


Ellie,
  So majestically you have once again captured your beautiful garden, a garden that will not fade, for your love keeps it in bloom.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
7 posted 2000-11-30 07:08 AM


Ellie,
  Once again you have magestically captured your lovely garden, a garden that will not fade for it blooms with your love.
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



kaile
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8 posted 2000-11-30 11:47 AM


you always manage to put a smile on this weary soul....thank you
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-11-30 07:34 PM


Ellie~
This is just so adorable.
Very vivid imagery.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dopey Dope
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10 posted 2000-11-30 09:40 PM


This was great! I loved this and could so envision it within my mind.
Lovely!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA
11 posted 2000-12-01 04:55 AM


Ellie-
This isn't just fairiely good--
it is FAIRE GOOD.You have such a wonderful
magic about your writings-your attitude- your visions--I am constantly impressed and charm by it all.    David


To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White)



vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
12 posted 2000-12-02 04:50 AM



ellie-
   this is wonderful, my friend..
   i just love when you write of fairies..

   hugs,
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Moon Dust
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Skelmersdale, UK
13 posted 2000-12-02 07:57 AM


Think i'll get some of the fairies instead of chrismas lights this year lovely images

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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