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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Snowflake from Heaven Expecting warm reception Gets the cold shoulder Crystal Excellence Perfect in every detail Not welcome in house 11-29-2000 [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 11-29-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; I love these little crystal gems, no two alike! With just the right touch of humor too. love, Sis Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
you are the man with these short gems, Dennis..lovely(again)..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
How rightly you point out that excellence is not always properly appreciated! And you did it with a smile. Perfect, as always. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very clever work, dennis....wish i could have been inspired enough to write the first haiku myself.... |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Dennis, I happen to like snow so a cold shoulder is not a bad thing for me. Well written. I like the way you pack the words with meaning...as should be for a haiku. INclan p.s. Check back to mine...I explained the tent in Nevember thing. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like welcomeing snow into the house, specailly when its thick enough to fall in some when you open the door. It's when it turns into water it aint welcome nice haiku tho Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Just wonderful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful Haiku! A great read!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Usually when one used the phrase "that was some snow job" it is not said in a kind way- bur here is an exception- in response to your exceptional Snow haikus--Brother-"That was SOME SNOW JOB" (and I mean that in the Kindest way, Love, David To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- the haiku king strikes again.. these are just wonderful.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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