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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
Hours away, miles apart, so far away, so close in heart. The words you speak, keep me strong, you lift me up where I belong. The things you do, the things you say, is what I hang on to each and everyday. It is your thoughts, your sweet emotions, that come to me in a very special way. I know we have only just met, my feelings, my love for you, there is just no way around it. I long to talk to you more and more, growing closer to you than the day before. It is your gentle words, that makes me need you here with me. Your hand is the hand I long to hold, your arms around me, never to let go. I dream of the day your lips touch mine, our bodies pressed with a gentle twine. I long to be loved by a man like you, you are so kind, so gentle, so pure. I know for now these are just dreams, but I long for the day they become reality. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Lilpeanut! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Lots of us have experienced something like this, longing for dreams to come true. Good luck with yours. Nice to see a new face at the Pub. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Welcome to the pub, lilpeanut, (I love that name)... this is a beautifully romantic poem. May your dreams be fulfilled! I look forward to more of your poetry! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey LilPeanut, nice to see you here hon. And another wonderful love filled poem from you, I enjoyed it very much  Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
welcome to the Pub, LilPeanut. this was sweet.the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LilPeanut~ Your rhyme was just wonderful in this. I enjoyed it immensely. Really liked this thought - 'The words you speak, keep me strong, you lift me up where I belong.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Lil.... Here's hoping you get what you wish for..... Wonderful read. Best |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
...if'n the boyo doesn't catch on ....let the Pub know.....*G* ...we have our ways ...*G* ...we know people..POWERFUL people..*L*... * giggles madly at the thought of poetry writing mafia/matchmakers**Sol Oh ...I forgot..LOVED THE PIECE!!!! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I agree completely with Solstice... We know people... But, make sure you let us know b4 we go off and have the poor fool done away with; great post! Luved it!  In every memory, sweet or sad, we find a small piece of tomorrow. Alicia A. Renzelman |
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