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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Will you be here when I grow old, To wrap your arms around me tight, Hold my hand as we stroll along, Just like we did last night? Will you tell me all the secrets, That you hold deep in your heart, Will I still be your best friend, Like I've been right from the start? Will you gaze into my eyes, And tell me how you see, The days ahead unfolding, Together, you and me? Will you be here when I grow old, To wrap your arms around me tight, Hold my hand as we stroll along, Just like you did last night? Will you kiss me with that passion, That burns so deep in you, Kiss me with that longing, Even when we're eighty-two? Will you touch me gently On my face with wrinkled skin, Will you still think I am as beautiful, As when we first began? Will you be here when I grow old, To wrap your arms around me tight, Hold my hand as we stroll along, Just like you did last night? If you don't plan to be here, Then you should tell me now, Because that's what I believe in, When I take that sacred vow. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh how I hope he will still be there for you. That is what the vow is all about. My darling promised he would be there and for over 30 years he has stood by me. Good Luck! |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
inot2B... Actually, I wrote this for a friend, I am still waiting...not so patiently..lol. Thanks for the encouragement. Best |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You have asked all the right questions in this loveliest of poems, that really could be set to music.. love, Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Lovely poem. Enjoyed it very much. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Good questions. I hope you find the one with the right answers soon.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Best! I love it! Denise |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Ellie... That's the way I have always pictured it. Maybe someday. Thank you. Sept... Thank you so much. KC.. Me Too! Denise.. Thank you....you always have kind words for me. Best |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
best..this is the dream we all want to come true..i hope you find such dream when you make your vows (or..whomever you wrote this for  ) hugs, g "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Tears.... This is beautiful, best. I'm off to send it to my "him." Good luck in your endeavors.... Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* just smiles...amazed* A little bit of 'preventative medicine " from the best girl in a crisis...excellent hun.. Sol |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
DG.... I hope when I find it, it is just like that. Thanks for the encouragement. Alicia... Thanks...I hope your HIM likes it...lol. Sol... I need that "preventative medicine" as you call it, so I don't fall prey to another...er...illness...lol...Thanks hun you always make me smile.((((((hugs))))))) Best |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BestGirl~ Oh, what a lovely write. So very, very lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
bestgirl sometimes i am a little put off by the way at how people treat marriage(and divorce) so lightly... like you, i believe the vow is sacred..thank you for expressing those feelings  |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Marge... Thank you so much....This is just the way I have always pictured it and hope someday to find it just this way. Kaile... I, like you, think that vow should be sacred, it should be a love that lasts forever, hope you find it someday. Thanks! Best [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
What a sweet thing to read, I have had 42 years of that, I thank God each day for having a wife who does just that, wrap me in her loving arms and holds me tight, I hope you get to experence this also. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
William... It's wonderful to hear that you and your wife have had all those loving years and so glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for your comments. Best |
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