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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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0 posted 2000-11-22 03:51 PM


That night we went out bowling
my luncheon crowd and me
we stopped to pick up Bunny
he loves to bowl you see

Squatch and lady, Des and Jack
made an ecclectic team
Queenie Bunny and I
happy just as three

" I wish you had a fourth" said squatch
" To bad Tooth Fairy works at night"
When suddenly a smiling dwarf
appeared within our sight

" Ahhhhh good evening to you one and all"
" Mind if I join your game??"
" Oh great a fourth!!" smiled Bunny
" Say Bud what's your name??"

"My name is Halef Haje Omar
come from the desert lands
upon my steed, Scheherezade
on break from duney sands"

" well Bud, you're on our team
go ahead and roll the ball
I'll put you down as OMAR"
said Bunny who scores us all.

Omar rolled and got a strike
everybody cheered
we each stepped up and tool a turn
and watched pins disappear

Omar always got a strike!
And we all looked at Lady
" Its not me folks, HONEST!!"
though both were tied at 80

At last our frames had ended
we all had fun and tied!!
we packed up and left the alleys
I asked, 'hey Omar where's your ride??'

He smiled and whistled for his steed
pure white arabian
"Salam to you good people
I'll see you soon again.."


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-22 08:18 PM


Very entertaining, again!!

Denise

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
2 posted 2000-11-23 06:19 AM


*claps*  I love it, hon... The story's so entertaining..    I just got a big grin on my face when I saw part 4 and 5 posted.. Gotta go read the next one now.  ~hugs~
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-11-24 11:03 AM


SolSon,
  Your cast of characters is amazing, each one uniquely developed, right before our eyes! Pure Magic!
Dennis :^)



Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-11-24 11:05 AM


SolSon,
  The SAGA continues! This is so entertaining! I do enjoy your work!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-11-24 11:34 AM


Yes, I agree, a children's book....on to 5

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
6 posted 2000-11-24 01:31 PM


Sol....

A children's book indeed. These are absolutely wonderful....and so creative.
((((hugs)))))

Best

kaile
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singapore
7 posted 2000-11-28 03:49 AM


good for OMAR!....now i definitely can use his help as my balls often roll down the "drain"....

entertaining reading

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