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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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We stared, beaming ahead Mannequins framed in a colour-dazzled world Young and fearless, We stood confidently, the world at our feet, with hardly any apprehension Calloused and disillusioned, I now yearn to jump into the photo and reside permanently as its lead character *special thanx to debbie for the idea of looking at a photo and writing whatever comes to your mind*  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhh...wouldn't it be grand to turn the clock back and return to a time when we were....what?...what we would like to be again? careful what you wish for Kaile.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is really great. Dawn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kaile; Ah, but what about the wisdom gained, and all the memories and friends since found. Count the loses, and decide again! Your writing is superb, as usual. I thank you as well, for your sincere replies to my poetry. Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kaile, this is wonderful I now yearn to jump into the photo and reside permanently as its lead character Oh how I have felt like this! Thanks Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, I like your Photo-Genious poetry, yes photos can bring a flood of memories back worth writing about! Good work here! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I suppose most everyone wishes to exchange places with someone who seems young and unafraid, at least once in a while, but it is true those snapshots tell you very little about the real person or his/her life. Better to be content with the life you have earned, but thanks for making us think about it. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ This is a wonderful projection piece. Great to get the muse - musing ! I like it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a very creative poem. I liked it a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, kaile!! Glad to see your writer's block is gone!! Denise |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Mannequins framed in a colour-dazzled world Young and fearless, We stood confidently, ~~~~~~ Wonder what was the photo you were looking at when you wrote this... But this part, makes me think that mannequins are made to perfection, unmarred and unrealistic... This is our mindset as fresh school leavers, as we stand confidently, with the world at our feet... Only takes a few years down the road for us to learn that, harsh is reality... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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